Honestly, there isn't a more gay plotline in exsistance.
ppl fighting randomly for some stones.
not to mention that it has a sonic fan character, the perfect example of terrible spriting ability.
Bad fan character + over-used Plotline that still sucks ass, even though this isn't a plotline, they just APPEAR fighting, + YOSHI(who is epic, but un-needed in this animation) + bad animation overall = 0/10.
Nuff' said, now watch, all you sonic fans are going to rate this review badly.
I don't cut anyone slack for any excuse, this being your first animation, isn't an excuse, even though it isn't bad for a first.
before I start, NEJI is spelled N-E-J-I.
you rlly need to work on aligning your sprites, it was very jumpy, and it looked wrong. :/
plus they literally Jumped like they where on mars, you may want to tone that down.
I hate stand-still animations, animations with no V-cam, because it has no pizzas and It's boring....I recomend you get one a practice with it.
the over all "battle" wasn't even a battle as they TOOK TURNS hitting each other, it wasn't fluent.
sounds aren't needed, but they would add some fun. : D
USE HIT EFFECTS, don't just have him get hit and go flying, it's un-realistic and looks wrong, using hit effects increases the epicness and it makes the audience FEEL the hits rather then watching it, and if they can imagine that the punch REALLY looked like it would've hurt, then you can send him flying, also, sliding the character just a dash when blocking a hit adds a nice effect as well.
remember to remove ALL back ground color from ALL sprites you use, It's just too noticeable that you left the black inside the symbol neji uses for his 64-palm attack -_-...
something else that bugs me-
the finishers look BAD.
like, you can get up not-harmed BAD.
the choose another winner button for sasuke is broken and you need to fix it, DO NOT post in your description to ignore it and choose neji first.
B4 you reply to this angrily like I know you probably will, read what I said and actually go over and fix it, trust me, it'll look much better.
I know it's bad,but i'm making a naruto vs lee and I promise i'll add:Longer fight,sound effects,and other stuff.
Top Three Parts:
3.Luig saying Gnarly
2.Toad's Salsa(but you kinda killed it when you showed a picture of toads salsa...)
1.Baby Parahna Plant XD
Another masterpiece, I love your games, I hope you make more.
I think the fact that it's emotional really makes this game dance to the beat of it's own drum. I especially like the christmas one, and adore the fact that all these games are challenges that this man overcomes to reach his dearly beloved.
I do have one question, do you get the ideas for these games within your own emotions?
It's wonderfulso far, I'd love to see this finished!
but you should have some sound effects as well.
and @ PANDANGERUSH, that is a terrible plotline...
Thank you! Yes, sound effects seem to be what everyone wants right now. So, they will be added. I'm glad you like this so far!
but you need to be more descriptive, and never tell anyone to add shading until they're satisfied, a better thing to say is have one light source and shade from there.
Spelling wasn't the best(neither is mine so I won't count that against ya), but You shouldn't put two frames in one in movie clips(talking about the mario walk) unless you have a frame rate of at least 17.
There wasn't anything "complex" about megaman's run sprites, and the more sprites DOES NOT always equal smoother quallity.
and having Megaman jump after running isn't any harder, and considering most ppl here have a basic understanding of flash, that description wasn't needed.
That wasn't all there is to know about sprites, you didn't go over using sprite effects, or creating sprite depth.
great for begginers.
Bleach deserves those awards, the manga is kick-ass and you didn't point out ANYTHING wrong with bleach, simply your interpretation, and what do kids who want to be japanese have anything to do with this? You didn't mention the manga, which is 1000X better then the anime, and Anime is SUPPOSSED to be pronounce
anim-eh. Bleach has won awards for best character production, a good plot, and for being POPULAR.
It doesn't have small character backrounds, the anime might, but the manag sure as hell doesn't. Every character ties into one another perfectly.
and about the plot pace, what do YOU want? A small, short, BORING plot? Most ppl happen to LIKE the current arrencar plot, Kubo doesn't cliche from any other manga except for DBZ, which was his role model.
the females in bleach have a perpose. Orohime was captured BECAUSE she had a special ability.
ICHIGO IS THE ONLY CHARACTER IN BLEACH WITH A BIG SWORD.
They look nothing like FF characters, they don't where odd, destinct clothing and have a dream they never get to fullfil because of somekind of either medical or emotional problem.
MANGA IS IT'S OWN STYLE OF COMIC, You can't say comic book and be talking about MANGA.
Ichigo isn't like cloud, he isn't a depressed faggot who thinks his life is a joke.
Aizen I'm guessing is the one you think is sepherath? Aizen, for starters, isn't the dark half of ichigo, and he is much stringer then Sepherath could ever dream of being.
all in all, you barelly touched apon any REAL facts of bleach, and the whole begining of the rant is about kids who want to be japanese.
didn't even bother reading
possibly some annoying rant from some teenaged white kid tryng to be Japanese
Great loop, I'm going to use it for a start menu in a bleach animation, is that o.k?
SOOO FUXING SWEET!!!!
I AM SOOOO USING THIS, If you don't mind.
I don't mind. Just make sure to credit me. :)
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