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[Sasuke vs Neji]

meh.

I don't cut anyone slack for any excuse, this being your first animation, isn't an excuse, even though it isn't bad for a first.
before I start, NEJI is spelled N-E-J-I.

you rlly need to work on aligning your sprites, it was very jumpy, and it looked wrong. :/
plus they literally Jumped like they where on mars, you may want to tone that down.
I hate stand-still animations, animations with no V-cam, because it has no pizzas and It's boring....I recomend you get one a practice with it.
the over all "battle" wasn't even a battle as they TOOK TURNS hitting each other, it wasn't fluent.
sounds aren't needed, but they would add some fun. : D
USE HIT EFFECTS, don't just have him get hit and go flying, it's un-realistic and looks wrong, using hit effects increases the epicness and it makes the audience FEEL the hits rather then watching it, and if they can imagine that the punch REALLY looked like it would've hurt, then you can send him flying, also, sliding the character just a dash when blocking a hit adds a nice effect as well.
remember to remove ALL back ground color from ALL sprites you use, It's just too noticeable that you left the black inside the symbol neji uses for his 64-palm attack -_-...
something else that bugs me-
the finishers look BAD.
like, you can get up not-harmed BAD.
the choose another winner button for sasuke is broken and you need to fix it, DO NOT post in your description to ignore it and choose neji first.

B4 you reply to this angrily like I know you probably will, read what I said and actually go over and fix it, trust me, it'll look much better.

UltimatePuppetMaster responds:

I know it's bad,but i'm making a naruto vs lee and I promise i'll add:Longer fight,sound effects,and other stuff.

[Sonic Advent]

eeehhhh...

Could have been WAY better, some tips for next time:
1. GET RID OF THOSE ANNOYING WHITE BARS ON THE TOP AND BOTTOM OF THE SCREEN.
2.Pick a different soundtrack then BLEACH, as it doesn't fit well, same goes for the intro, it just seems wrong to me to have a sonic series with a BLEACH Japanese opening....
3.The fight in the begining was really boring, try to use better camera movement and some better effects, both sprite and sound wise.
4.the animation Qualitty oddly changes from the opening on, like you animated the begging, and someone else animated the rest, try to stick with one style.
5.YOU DID NOT CREDIT ANY OF THE RESOURCES FOR THE SOUNDS/SPRITES YOU USED!!!!
6.use movie clips for the stances, as some are eirther not alighned, or are simply not animated.
7. REMEMBER TO TAKE OUT ALL WHITE/COLORED BACK GROUND FROM THE SPRITESHEET OUT, As it's obvious that you left some of it in the sprites occasionally.
8.I CANNOT STRESS THIS ENOUGH, Pls use buttons for the text, if you don't know how, check some tuts.

Over all, you should practice a bit before making another episode.

WolfoftheDarkFlames responds:

got any specific tuts on the text buttons?

[SNA 2]

not much better...

this was an epic fail as soon as you announced that this had a sonic fan character in it.

It had some of the worst camera control I've ever seen, no offence.

Not much action, and the only action in it doesn't diserve the title DBZ.

The fan characters are just as I thought they would be, terrible sonic edits, except for the human one, but he needs shading. Yea, I know in the begging it says to not view it if you don't like fan characters, but, this was doomed to a low score from having that in the animation.

It was a smart Idea to have different dimensions for the different sonic sprite styles, but the way you conveyed the plot was very blurry. like, WHY does sonic need to get the queen mushroom?

You should have also looped the music.

DeckardTheHedgehog responds:

Those fancharacters are not mine ok?

-About the camera... yeah I think that the camera is not that good but it does not deserve a "worst camera control I've ever seen".

-Not much action? It has action, not DBZ level of action but it HAS action...

-Like I said before not all of them are mine, just Deckard.

-The machine needs the mushroom to work.

-I've looped. actually I've set to loop ALL THE SONGS 9999 times.

[NG MODS Are Faggots]

This is soo stupid.

1.NG's mods aren't that bad.
2.My freind Kyle is gay, so I don't think this was very appropriate.
3.The worst possible thing to do is to make a video on this, it'll only get the mod's angryer at you....
4.wtf did they do to you? and if this is only because they got rid of one of your flashes, then just wow, -_-

InsaneScaryMovieGuy responds:

They Think Their Rich Nigguherz But They Aren't!!!!!